FIC: And I stand inside today (ATWT, Luke/Noah, AU, Burn My Shadow series)

[freakykat]

Title: And I stand inside today
Author: freakykat
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Luke Snyder/Noah Mayer
Warnings: cheating (heh!), angst
Word count: 1250

Summary: What he doesn't know is what it means.

Author's notes: So, I thought I was done with this verse but apparently not. Beta by the awesome noelleleithe and tsarcasm. Title from the song "Burn My Shadow". Feedback loved.

All previous parts found here.


And I stand inside today


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Comments

[carolinablu85.livejournal.com]

I don't know where to start besides repeat what I said on twitter- holy shit, Noah's a fucking BADASS. and yes, I LOVE what he said to Luke in the bar. The image of him snapping that, swallowing back the vodka, slamming the glass down... that was yum. Just as yum as the encounter in the alley that followed. Dare I ask if Noah knew Luke would follow him out there? He didn't seem too concerned with finishing that phone call ;)

And I will say, you've written Luke's total floundering and uncertainty and underlying anger at EVERYTHING really really well. His frustration at being stuck where he is is so palpable.

So, um, more please? Yes?

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

More coming your way!

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

And because I'm crazy I hit send before saying THANK YOU FOR READING!