FIC: And I stand inside today (ATWT, Luke/Noah, AU, Burn My Shadow series)

[freakykat]

Title: And I stand inside today
Author: freakykat
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Luke Snyder/Noah Mayer
Warnings: cheating (heh!), angst
Word count: 1250

Summary: What he doesn't know is what it means.

Author's notes: So, I thought I was done with this verse but apparently not. Beta by the awesome noelleleithe and tsarcasm. Title from the song "Burn My Shadow". Feedback loved.

All previous parts found here.


And I stand inside today


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Comments

[carolinablu85.livejournal.com]

I don't know where to start besides repeat what I said on twitter- holy shit, Noah's a fucking BADASS. and yes, I LOVE what he said to Luke in the bar. The image of him snapping that, swallowing back the vodka, slamming the glass down... that was yum. Just as yum as the encounter in the alley that followed. Dare I ask if Noah knew Luke would follow him out there? He didn't seem too concerned with finishing that phone call ;)

And I will say, you've written Luke's total floundering and uncertainty and underlying anger at EVERYTHING really really well. His frustration at being stuck where he is is so palpable.

So, um, more please? Yes?

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

More coming your way!

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

And because I'm crazy I hit send before saying THANK YOU FOR READING!

[jackie-oh.livejournal.com]

I am like crazy addicted to this 'verse because cheating!boys makes me NNGGHH. Wish I had some better and more coherent comments but, yeah, brain fried.

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

Oh. Then...you're going to kinda love the next part, lol. Cause everyone is cheating! LOL.

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

Also, thank you so much for reading!

[kelly-ken.livejournal.com]

Oh, boys. LOVED the part where Noah stops Luke from swallowing that drink. It was insanely hot for some reason. :P
But yes, loved the desperation in both Luke and Noah in this fic and how they just couldn't stop themselves.
Thanks for this!

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

Pissed off Noah is always hot! OMG.

Thank you for reading!

[frances-veritas.livejournal.com]

Okay, are you fucking kidding me right now, Kat? How is it that you are THIS FUCKING GOOD? At everything you write (which I am so shamefully behind on feedback on) you are THIS FUCKING GOOD? How are you not published yet? HOW ARE YOU NOT MAKING MONEY OFF OF YOUR WRITING?

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This entire series is a tangle of complicated FUCKERY. But OMG, KAT, I AM IN LOVE.

I love that Luke knows something is going with Reid and Chris. I love that Reid probably knows that Luke is doing stuff with Noah or is not over Noah. I love that they BOTH know but they're not doing anything about it because the people they really wanna be with might not want to be with them. And they're scared. And GOD. The web that you weave in this story, is fucking GENIUS.

Everything, every feeling that you have your characters feel in it is so RAW and concrete and REAL. And it's only the second chapter and I'm already DYING.

I LOVE how in Luke's face Noah got. I love the desperate, angry, needy coupling they had at YO's. I love how there never has to be any words between them, just WANT, AND FEELING AND NEED. AND LUKENOAHLUKENOAHLUKENOAH. And just dskfjaskfjashdfkjafshaklsdjfhasfklajfhaskldfjadh

KAT. KAT. KAT. WHY ARE YOU SO FUCKING AMAZING? I AM SERIOUS. PLEASE ANSWER THIS QUESTION FOR ME.

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

I don't even know where to begin with you and your feedback, omg, I love it so so much. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING! THANK YOU!

I just...I have no words here.

I promise more whatever the hell this is though.

\o/!

[crownroyal-51.livejournal.com]

Damn...this was hot. Luke needs to leave Reid like right now. Don't be a fool!

[freakykat.livejournal.com]

LOL. Thank you.

Hmmm...the consequences should be MIGHTY interesting.

[tsarcasm.livejournal.com]

I love you. And this. In other things you already know:

So I was trying to think up something delicious to post as feedback for this (because it is delicious and needs something good) and I flashed back to the night we were walking around Times Square (New York, how I miss you!) and I found out about Alexis and Sam and Marie just started going to town in my head. Oye; Sonny misses the monestary.

I love that your evilness just feeds my evilness.