In this chapter, the sentence goes "“You're not going to be able to move, Noah. Not for the first few transformations."
In the next chapter, in this sentence:
“You need to stop fidgeting, Noah, okay?"
I didn't notice it any other times so I think you're good!
I have at least one typo in my 'Social Media' story, but I can't fix it because of the weird combo of Rich Text and HTML I wrestled with to format it. LJ erases ALL revisions if I try to correct. It did that even when all I wanted to do was change the posts from private to public, and I had to do the formatting ALL over again. So MY typos will stand LOL.
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Date: 2011-08-23 01:48 pm (UTC)In this chapter, the sentence goes "“You're not going to be able to move, Noah. Not for the first few transformations."
In the next chapter, in this sentence:
“You need to stop fidgeting, Noah, okay?"
I didn't notice it any other times so I think you're good!
I have at least one typo in my 'Social Media' story, but I can't fix it because of the weird combo of Rich Text and HTML I wrestled with to format it. LJ erases ALL revisions if I try to correct. It did that even when all I wanted to do was change the posts from private to public, and I had to do the formatting ALL over again. So MY typos will stand LOL.