This is absolutely gorgeous. I love the staccato style you are using. It is really fitting. You are an amazing writer. I love your stuff.
The strange(amazingly written) thing about this is that I am not sure whether I want Noah to end up with James or Luke. He has been through so much already. Boys were so so sweet though. Can't wait for the rest!
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Date: 2011-01-17 07:32 am (UTC)The strange(amazingly written) thing about this is that I am not sure whether I want Noah to end up with James or Luke. He has been through so much already. Boys were so so sweet though. Can't wait for the rest!