" He knows that Justin wants him just as much and it’s powerful - this moment."
The whole progression was very powerful, I thought. I loved the way you wrote in very short sentences, very short paragraphs, just as people's thoughts and actions would occur.
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Date: 2010-05-16 07:02 pm (UTC)The whole progression was very powerful, I thought. I loved the way you wrote in very short sentences, very short paragraphs, just as people's thoughts and actions would occur.
Brava!