Date: 2008-09-24 09:21 pm (UTC)
Oh, how much I am going to miss these fabulous, daily treats. =)

Loved this part so much, the second half in particular. The emotions were so powerful. It was easy to feel what Justin went through, trying not to freak out but to be strong for Brian.

“I’m not going anywhere, Sunshine.”

Justin gave Brian a watery smile.

“Neither am I.

*sighs* =)

Brian smirked just slightly. “You’re head is one jumbled mess, isn’t it?”

Justin shook his head. “No.”

It wasn’t. His heart was, though. Now relieved but still feeling that fear that had gripped it when that phone call had arrived.

But he could push that fear away now. He would. Deep down inside and when he knew Brian was perfectly okay…when they were back home together in their own house, in their own bed…he might pull it out and examine it.

When Brian made him mad again - which he would, inevitably - he would take it out and remember for one brief moment the grief that had almost shattered him at the thought of losing Brian.

This part was so powerful! Such a great imagination.

If that chapter isn't about freakin love, I don't know what is.
Awesome!
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