I've just finished chapter 9... I had quite a lot to catch up! now I'll try to leave a decent comment... I like this fic and the changes you made to the canon CL's version! one thing I really loved is Justin going after Ethan to tell him that their story was over and finding out about Jake. watching the show I was very surprised when Justin went all the way to Harrisburg and didn't approach Ethan. when he saw him talking to the fan, he probably understood that something was cooking and I was expecting Justin to go after Ian and find out the betrayal. instead he went back to Pitts!!! I like your version better, sounds more convincing ;))) I'll wait for updates!
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Date: 2008-08-26 09:02 pm (UTC)I'll wait for updates!