That story has been absolutely beautiful. I somehow held my breath right up to the end, well I thought they'd end up on the same page together, but you managed to create an inner tension right up to the end.
This was very well written, because it had depth and the characters were very genuine to me. I loved this Brian who at this point of his life could be honest with himself at last and still be totally in character. A wonderful piece to read.
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Date: 2008-04-02 02:14 pm (UTC)This was very well written, because it had depth and the characters were very genuine to me. I loved this Brian who at this point of his life could be honest with himself at last and still be totally in character. A wonderful piece to read.
Thank you!
Nicki