You evil, evil person, you. How dare you leave something this good there?
I love this story kind of a lot, and I really love this chapter. You have Brian's and Justin's voices down so perfectly. They aren't just well-written and interesting, and they're not interpretations of the character - they are the characters. Brian and Justin. As seen on TV.
Especially Justin. Well, no, not especially Justin, because they're both equally in character, but this is very much the Justin of the last 2 (well, 2 and a half) seasons: independent, confident, refusing to take any crap from Brian. He's strong!Justin, and I love him.
And the ending of the chapter? Well, aside from how evil you are, as I already mentioned, you are also rather brilliant for coming up with this particular plot point as a means for reuniting Brian and Justin. So much love for that.
On a technical note, I noticed two typos, and they're both in the same sentence: you’re Armani clad ass is back on it’s way to the Pitts. - should be "your" and "its."
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Date: 2008-02-19 01:11 pm (UTC)I love this story kind of a lot, and I really love this chapter. You have Brian's and Justin's voices down so perfectly. They aren't just well-written and interesting, and they're not interpretations of the character - they are the characters. Brian and Justin. As seen on TV.
Especially Justin. Well, no, not especially Justin, because they're both equally in character, but this is very much the Justin of the last 2 (well, 2 and a half) seasons: independent, confident, refusing to take any crap from Brian. He's strong!Justin, and I love him.
And the ending of the chapter? Well, aside from how evil you are, as I already mentioned, you are also rather brilliant for coming up with this particular plot point as a means for reuniting Brian and Justin. So much love for that.
On a technical note, I noticed two typos, and they're both in the same sentence: you’re Armani clad ass is back on it’s way to the Pitts. - should be "your" and "its."