Date: 2008-02-12 12:29 am (UTC)
WHOA. Awesome chapter, Kat! When Gale said 'I'd rather be dead', tears came to my eyes... you manage to convey Gale's pain and frustration, and his fear - not only of the disease, but most of all, of Randy finally leaving. His conversation with Neil was heartbreaking - saying happy was too much to hope for. God, you really portray him as so strong and so fragile all at once... so resigned... and, yet, amidst all this pain, it's like he's finally seeing a new way things could be. AMAZING.
Can't wait for more!
Huuuuugs,
Arlad
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

Profile

freakykat: (Default)
Katicus

August 2020

S M T W T F S
      1
2345678
9101112131415
16171819202122
23 24 2526272829
3031     

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jul. 3rd, 2025 11:55 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios