1. The dream. I was in friggin' heaven, as Justin was, and then... 'baby'. My eyes flew open, I reeled back, and said... this was too good to be true. PERFECT.
lol. I'm sorry about that. Thank you. And will it help if I say that the title "waking in dreams" is a subtle hint...mayhap what Justin dreamt about wasn't exactly JUST a dream...just saying lol.
2. The way Justin said he'd been home in the dream. The way he reacted to Ethan's 'clammy hands'. His sadness.
It's started to come to him now. The realization of what he did. And he can't take it back. He doesn't want to or shouldn't have to. It was something he *had* to do. And now he has to make a decision if he wants to continue where he is.
3. Brian reflecting on Emmett and what he meant to him. OMG. WOW. Like... I really, really love Emmett and love his relationship with Brian and you captured it sooo perfectly... Brian being protective, and admiring, and *loving* Emmett. I think that might have been my fave section right there.
What I wrote was something I always sensed about Brian's feelings for Emmett. He rarely took shots at him. He was almost always sympathetic. Openly affectioniate with him. He seemed to carry a great respect for Emmett and I think vice versa. So I'm glad that I could convey that.
4. Daphne. Can I have one? Seriously, seriously in character, JUST what Justin needed.
LOL. I want a Daphne too! *claps* Glad she's IC. I've been working with POV for something else and it came pretty easily here.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting honey!
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Date: 2007-10-07 02:39 am (UTC)lol. I'm sorry about that. Thank you. And will it help if I say that the title "waking in dreams" is a subtle hint...mayhap what Justin dreamt about wasn't exactly JUST a dream...just saying lol.
2. The way Justin said he'd been home in the dream. The way he reacted to Ethan's 'clammy hands'. His sadness.
It's started to come to him now. The realization of what he did. And he can't take it back. He doesn't want to or shouldn't have to. It was something he *had* to do. And now he has to make a decision if he wants to continue where he is.
3. Brian reflecting on Emmett and what he meant to him. OMG. WOW. Like... I really, really love Emmett and love his relationship with Brian and you captured it sooo perfectly... Brian being protective, and admiring, and *loving* Emmett. I think that might have been my fave section right there.
What I wrote was something I always sensed about Brian's feelings for Emmett. He rarely took shots at him. He was almost always sympathetic. Openly affectioniate with him. He seemed to carry a great respect for Emmett and I think vice versa. So I'm glad that I could convey that.
4. Daphne. Can I have one? Seriously, seriously in character, JUST what Justin needed.
LOL. I want a Daphne too! *claps* Glad she's IC. I've been working with POV for something else and it came pretty easily here.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting honey!