First someone must berate u for how long it took u to update - way too many many hours.. I was praying for a mere handfull of hours, 5 or 6 mere hours of anticipation... But I suppose one must actually wait for writing, which is generally a time consuming activity and waiting is a necassary part of it..
And It was v v worthwhile, the waiting,
Your characters r perfectly IC, Daphne's dialogue and support especially and Emmett's character was perfectly disected too..
The sex was perfect too, it was really easy to picture it in that slow hazy, dreamy quality, each touch a caress, a sigh = it even made me sigh and I, sadly, wasnt even being touched by Brian.. but I sighed anyway
And u dont know how thankful I am that Justin didnt "do it" with Ethan.. Iv always found it very hard to imagine and I constantly try and convince myself that Justin was the top in that relationship.. Ethan was greasy and clammy, he only bathed that one time while Brian and Justin were constantly seen in the shower.. (Nods fervantly)
Well yeah that, I think is my whole, very lengthy review... cant wait for the next Chapter
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Date: 2007-10-06 09:55 am (UTC)And It was v v worthwhile, the waiting,
Your characters r perfectly IC, Daphne's dialogue and support especially and Emmett's character was perfectly disected too..
The sex was perfect too, it was really easy to picture it in that slow hazy, dreamy quality, each touch a caress, a sigh = it even made me sigh and I, sadly, wasnt even being touched by Brian.. but I sighed anyway
And u dont know how thankful I am that Justin didnt "do it" with Ethan.. Iv always found it very hard to imagine and I constantly try and convince myself that Justin was the top in that relationship.. Ethan was greasy and clammy, he only bathed that one time while Brian and Justin were constantly seen in the shower.. (Nods fervantly)
Well yeah that, I think is my whole, very lengthy review... cant wait for the next Chapter