YAYYYYYYY!!! I feel like 1801 people are going to say "ZOMG WEREWOLF BB! KEYSMASHKEYSMASHKEYSMASH" on here, so let me be the person to eighteen-hundred-and-second it. It's really frakking good, Kat. Really good. Really. Good. Like, it gets set up well and progresses well and ends well and by "well" I mean "SO FUCKING GOOD". And everyone is gonna tell you just how "so fucking good," so there's just one thing I want to talk about that I really really love about your writing and this story and how you write this story- the intimacy. I'm not just talking about the sex (though, yeah, it's more than just a little okay :P)- I'm talking about the little things the guys do to touch each other. My favorite is the stuff with their faces- noses against cheeks, mouths against necks, foreheads to chins, etc etc. Not even kissing or using their hands, just brushing some part of them against some part of the other. Because they have to/want to. I love those tiny little moments. (And not just with them- love Billy needing to do it too, bro-kissing Jake or being there for Van, I love all of it.) That's my favorite part about what you do- the plot and twists are awesome, but the characters are awesomer. They're not overshadowed by story, they are the story.
So, um yeah. Thumbs up. zomg. werewolf bb. keysmashkeysmashkeysmash. :D
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So, um yeah. Thumbs up. zomg. werewolf bb. keysmashkeysmashkeysmash. :D