ext_148328 ([identity profile] sweetiejelly.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] freakykat 2011-04-26 01:15 am (UTC)

Heart in my throat! Also, what do you mean you can't write smut? :P This was *fans self*. Yeah.

Luke’s mouth is warm, soft on Noah’s and his hands move to cup Noah’s face, tilting it so that their lips slant across each other. The gentleness shocks Noah enough that his mouth opens and he catches the moan before it leaves his throat, cuts it off so it only comes out as a silent sigh.
You got me right from the start just like Luke got Noah. Love the tension, love how they together felt like home.

Really like what you did w/the silence thing too. How Luke is sort of the place where Noah felt free to be himself, to exist, to be whole. And without him, well, a part of him is silenced, gone. So well done. ♥

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