well, i'm kinda happy you broke my heart back at chapter one, so i thought , hey, it can't get worse... man was i wrong the first part i could read with a kind of ease, introducing James, and the interaction between the three of them... i could breathe in and out, in and out... and then .. ""it's time , right"" and Luke's show started.. i had to hold my breath.. what followed was a total honest, raw and believable scene between two people, deeply in love, caring and so, so hurt....i liked the scene most when there where laying down on the bed, almost touching everywhere... so close,..:(((, yes, that easiness... i hope to god that you can fix this, fix them.. then i'm possible able to leave a more coherent comment... **grabs a tissue** Thanks Annette<3
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the first part i could read with a kind of ease, introducing James, and the interaction between the three of them... i could breathe in and out, in and out... and then .. ""it's time , right"" and Luke's show started.. i had to hold my breath.. what followed was a total honest, raw and believable scene between two people, deeply in love, caring and so, so hurt....i liked the scene most when there where laying down on the bed, almost touching everywhere... so close,..:(((, yes, that easiness...
i hope to god that you can fix this, fix them.. then i'm possible able to leave a more coherent comment... **grabs a tissue**
Thanks Annette<3