ext_19746 ([identity profile] ladybugkay.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] freakykat 2008-09-09 08:00 pm (UTC)

What a fantastic chapter! Aside from Justin's misinformation about the man answering Brian's door, there was nothing to give me that squirming ache in the pit of my stomach when Brian and Justin aren't together.

I love the joyous nature of the reunion between Brian and Justin, the way Justin could sense Brian the moment he walked in, and I lovelovelovelovelove Justin surprising Brian at Pride. There is this almost giddiness involved whenever these two come together again after being separated, and you've nailed it in this chapter.

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