ext_51314 ([identity profile] wouldbedorothy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] freakykat 2008-02-08 12:49 pm (UTC)

That was delicious, dear! Oh, you and Kurt and Janto all together... almost too much for me, lol...

“Okay, then. You’re a wanker, Jack. Happy?”

Bwaha, brilliant. Ianto/Owen stuff was great. Ianto/Jack was hot.

And I know I suck, being a beta after the fact, but I figure you probably want to change "The tone was drool" to "droll" (maybe "Jack's breathe" at end to "breath" but that's less important) ;-bbb

I would huggle Ianto but he's busy right now.

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