That was delicious, dear! Oh, you and Kurt and Janto all together... almost too much for me, lol...
“Okay, then. You’re a wanker, Jack. Happy?”
Bwaha, brilliant. Ianto/Owen stuff was great. Ianto/Jack was hot.
And I know I suck, being a beta after the fact, but I figure you probably want to change "The tone was drool" to "droll" (maybe "Jack's breathe" at end to "breath" but that's less important) ;-bbb
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“Okay, then. You’re a wanker, Jack. Happy?”
Bwaha, brilliant. Ianto/Owen stuff was great. Ianto/Jack was hot.
And I know I suck, being a beta after the fact, but I figure you probably want to change "The tone was drool" to "droll" (maybe "Jack's breathe" at end to "breath" but that's less important) ;-bbb
I would huggle Ianto but he's busy right now.