ext_19746 ([identity profile] ladybugkay.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] freakykat 2007-11-22 01:19 am (UTC)

No, no, no, no, no. Brian! I really think he needs to confide in Justin, because he needs someone to take care of him. Like, here, in my favourite part:
"The look that crossed Brian’s face made Justin’s insides clench, and he did the only thing he knew he could. What he knew Brian might have done for him.

He saved him."

I love this story, and I'm so glad you're aiming for an ending that won't be tragic, although I'm worried about what will happen to Brian in the meantime.

Excellent chapter!

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